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Argumentative Essay: Should School Start Later? — v2

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Vanessa Oliveiro

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that my initial stand softened once I weighed the counter-arguments raised in class. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Shawn Lim	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / StructureArgument / Content	Apr 5, 2026