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Editing Exercise: Subject-Verb Agreement — v2

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Vanessa Oliveiro

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Shawn Lim	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	Punctuation	Jun 1, 2026