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Situational Writing: Email to a Community Club — v2

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Zhi Hao Ng

Content: To begin with, small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Maricel Santos	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	GrammarSentence Structure	May 23, 2026