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Situational Writing: Speech for Racial Harmony Day — v2

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Zi Xuan Tan

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: the writer's childhood memories anchor the passage and give the argument its emotional weight. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Joanna Reyes	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / ContentOrganisation / Structure	Mar 31, 2025