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Comprehension: Growing Up in Tiong Bahru — v1

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Zi Xuan Tan

Content: Many people believe that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Maricel Santos	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	PunctuationSentence Structure	Jun 12, 2025