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Descriptive Essay: A Hawker Centre at Noon — v3

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Zi Xuan Tan

Content: Many people believe that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Shawn Lim	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	Punctuation	Jan 10, 2026