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Comprehension: The Kampong Spirit — v1

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Zi Xuan Tan

Content: It cannot be denied that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Kenji Ong	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	Punctuation	Nov 13, 2025