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Editing Exercise: Commonly Confused Words — v1

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Zhi Hao Ng

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Student
Zhi Hao Ng
Assignment
Editing Exercise: Commonly Confused Words
Version
v1
Submitted
May 28, 2026
Homework Due
Jun 2, 2026

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Content
The passage suggests that students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Joanna ReyesGood effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.PunctuationJun 2, 2026