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Editing Exercise: Subject-Verb Agreement — v2

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Zi Xuan Tan

Content: The passage suggests that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Shawn Lim	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / Content	Aug 3, 2025