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Argumentative Essay: Should School Start Later? — v1

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Yi Xuan Toh

Content: To begin with, the writer's childhood memories anchor the passage and give the argument its emotional weight. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Shawn Lim	Strong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.	Argument / Content	May 30, 2025