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Descriptive Essay: The MRT at Rush Hour — v2

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Yi Xuan Toh

Content: There is a common assumption that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Kenji Ong	Strong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.	Argument / Content	Mar 30, 2026