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Argumentative Essay: Should School Start Later? — v2

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Yi Xuan Toh

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Kristine Bautista	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	PunctuationSentence Structure	Apr 5, 2025