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Descriptive Essay: A Hawker Centre at Noon — v1

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Yi Xuan Toh

Content: There is a common assumption that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Joanna Reyes	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / Structure	Nov 2, 2025