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Situational Writing: Speech for Racial Harmony Day — v2

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Yi Xuan Toh

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Kristine Bautista	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / Structure	Aug 10, 2025