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Comprehension: Why We Procrastinate — v2

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Xin Yi Chua

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Joanna Reyes	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / StructureArgument / Content	Jan 3, 2025