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Descriptive Essay: A Hawker Centre at Noon — v1

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Xin Yi Chua

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: my initial stand softened once I weighed the counter-arguments raised in class. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Maricel Santos	Strong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.	Argument / Content	Nov 4, 2025