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Comprehension: The Kampong Spirit — v3

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Xin Yi Chua

Content: Many people believe that small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Kenji Ong	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / Content	Jan 29, 2025