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Comprehension: The Kampong Spirit — v2

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Xin Yi Chua

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: my initial stand softened once I weighed the counter-arguments raised in class. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Joanna Reyes	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	Punctuation	Jan 25, 2025