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Comprehension: The Kampong Spirit — v1

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Xin Yi Chua

Content: Many people believe that students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Maricel Santos	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / ContentOrganisation / Structure	Jan 14, 2025