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Narrative Essay: The Wrong Bus — v1

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Xin Yi Chua

Content: It cannot be denied that students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Kristine Bautista	Careful with subject-verb agreement — 'the group of students were' should be 'was'. Also proofread for spelling; I marked four slips in the margin.	GrammarSpelling	Apr 6, 2025