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Argumentative Essay: Money Is the Best Motivator — v1

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Shu Hui Lim

Content: Many people believe that careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Kristine Bautista	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	PunctuationSentence Structure	May 20, 2026