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Summary Writing: Urban Farming Passage — v2

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Shu Hui Lim

Content: Many people believe that students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Kristine Bautista	Strong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.	Argument / Content	May 17, 2026