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Summary Writing: Urban Farming Passage — v1

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Shu Hui Lim

Content: To begin with, small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Shawn Lim	Careful with subject-verb agreement — 'the group of students were' should be 'was'. Also proofread for spelling; I marked four slips in the margin.	GrammarSpelling	May 7, 2026