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Argumentative Essay: Social Media Does More Harm Than Good — v2

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Meera Menon

Content: The passage suggests that small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Maricel Santos	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / Structure	Jun 5, 2026