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Argumentative Essay: Social Media Does More Harm Than Good — v1

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Meera Menon

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Paolo dela Cruz	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / Structure	May 22, 2026