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Narrative Essay: A Promise Kept — v2

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Zhi Hao Ng

Content: There is a common assumption that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Maricel Santos	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / ContentOrganisation / Structure	Jun 14, 2026