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Discursive Essay: The Cost of Convenience — v3

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Meera Menon

Content: The passage suggests that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Kristine Bautista	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	PunctuationSpelling	Jun 22, 2026