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Narrative Essay: A Promise Kept — v1

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Zhi Hao Ng

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Paolo dela Cruz	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	PunctuationSentence Structure	Jun 1, 2026