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Comprehension: Growing Up in Tiong Bahru — v1

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Meera Menon

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Student
Meera Menon
Assignment
Comprehension: Growing Up in Tiong Bahru
Version
v1
Submitted
May 22, 2026
Homework Due
May 26, 2026

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Content
In today's world, it is increasingly clear that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Maricel SantosGood effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.PunctuationSentence StructureMay 29, 2026