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Comprehension: The Kampong Spirit — v1

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Jing Wen Krishnan

Content: The passage suggests that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Kenji Ong	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	Punctuation	Apr 22, 2026