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Situational Writing: Email to a Community Club — v1

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Zhi Hao Ng

Content: To begin with, the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Shawn Lim	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	May 13, 2026